Inside the Fence

i danced across the angry sand
to find

your lips pressed into the
pinching wire

i hurled my self against the
rush of

blasting fire spikes that raked
the un

suspecting skin of my

desperate lips

barbed-wire kisses


4 responses

  1. This is very deep my friend. I have tried to break down each word by its individual meaning to make sense of it, but perhaps that is futile. Rather, just take it in and let the imagination of its imagery take over.

    November 21, 2009 at 9:25 pm

    • seekraz

      Thank you, Sir Jason…there’s an incarcerated someone being visited by a lover…the relationship continues with the fence between them…the barbed-wire kisses. 🙂

      November 22, 2009 at 6:05 am

  2. Becky Zibert

    Very nice…you paint a very cool picture for all of us who enjoy your “thoughts of thoughts and other sundry things”!

    November 23, 2009 at 7:52 am

    • seekraz

      What a surprise to see you here! Thank you for visiting…and for your nice words…. 🙂

      November 23, 2009 at 8:45 am

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